The things I would like to be apart of the narrative:
- When the moon touched the earth - maybe will be the title
- One day it would happen they said. - the opening sentence?
- They were named by the colour of their eyes, it got quite confusing. - I like the idea of the characters being named after eye colours. First off it could be visually better and I think its a nice touch to the story.
- Yellow eyed Bull stood up and took off his mask. "I just can't be doing with this right now", he said shaking his head. He rearranged his mask and got back on all fours. - So this sentence needs alot of work but I am really keen to have a single mention that all the animal characters are actually just masked creatures, I think this will be an important part of the story. The animals will portray their stereotypes or meanings, but why? Is this because they wear the masks they must become the animals traits.
- All the beasts and creatures climb on top of each other, forming a great big wall. Higher and higher. The large animals at the bottom. -I am still deciding if I want this is how they solve the problem, this or a big ladder. These are things I need to decide now. I think tomorrow I am going to draw up a very simple story board. See what looks best and start trying to do at least one to draw up a day.
(Just to let you know this is just notes in my notepad so it could come across as complete nonsense)
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